Angel of Death

Hey KJ! I thought I'd get these two reviews over with before I hid over to look at The Experiment! I'm so happy to read more of this! Alright, 'nough ...

Hello Ash! I purposely ignored everyone else's comments. I want what happens to be a surprise, so I apologize if I repeat anything they said. His smile was wide in ...

Hey Ky, It's seems like it's been a REALLY long time, since I've read anything of yours. I did not read anything that Hannah said, so I apologize if I ...

Hey KJ! Whoa! You're on the roll with this story. Hopefully my review will be of some help. A burly man I somehow hadn’t noticed before stood when that horn ...

Hey Han-chan! we never clung so tight as that night, I think you should get rid of the 'as' because it doesn't make sense but then the rhythm is completely ...

~Edited~ ~Angel

Hey KJ! I really should be sleep but I really want to know what happens, so I apologize if this critique is bad. For a moment all I was capable ...

Hey Gal, Thanks for your critique. It was helpful and actually, I agree with you 100% I really didn't put much thought into this poem at first, seeing as I ...

Loss of Eden By Angel of Death the morning is gravid with dew drops. sweet from the petals of the flowers that bare their yellow eyes, to the endless torrent ...

Hey KJ! Darn, I was hopin' I was gonna be the first one again but I'm so happy you posted another chapter of this so soon! Seriously, I wish I ...

Hey Connie! It's been a while since I reviewed anything of yours but hopefully this will be a helpful critique. ^_^ Tessa shook as Gina held the gun. Her hands ...

Hey KJ! Mom because of Dad, Mattie because of what I’d said, done to him… Try: Mom because of Dad, Mattie because of what I'd said to him..." Well, I ...

Hey KJ! It's good to see another chapter of this. I’d wrapped my arms around Phil’s neck and was moving against him in a way that a year ago I ...

Hello Merry! You don't know how happy I was when I saw this! I wish that I had made some tea. I always review better when I have something hot ...

Hey Jare-bear! I liked this a lot. It was written well, there wasn't really anything for me to nit-pick but it was certainly jumbled. Jumbled in a good way, I ...